The bar chart below shows the proportions of English men and women of different ages who were living alone in 2011. The pie chart compares the numbers of bedrooms in these one-person households.
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of English males and females who choose to be alone in various age groups in 2011. The pie chart shows the quantity of bedrooms a single person based on England has in their houses in 2011.
Generally, it can be clearly seen from the first chart that 35-49 is the age group which has the most numerous men and women in England are single and live alone. Besides, we can see from the second chart that English single person tends to have 2 bedrooms in their households.
To begin with the bar chart, it is obvious that there were approximately 65% of 35-49 years old men and women based on England choose single life which the highest percentage compared to all age groups. Besides, many other age groups also have comparative number that were ranked 25-34, 16-24, 50-64, 75-84, 85 and over with 60%, 53%, 50%, 35%, 28%, 23% respectively.
Looking at the pie chart, it can be seen that 4, 5 or more bedrooms have lowest proportion with 5,3% and 1,4% respectively. 1, 3 bedrooms have nearly the same percentage (28%, 29.8%). The highest is having 2 bedrooms in a single person’s house.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 135, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to single'
Suggestion: to single
...d men and women based on England choose single life which the highest percentage compa...
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Line 5, column 135, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to single'.
Suggestion: to single
...d men and women based on England choose single life which the highest percentage compa...
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Line 7, column 69, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'have the lowest'.
Suggestion: have the lowest
... can be seen that 4, 5 or more bedrooms have lowest proportion with 5,3% and 1,4% respectiv...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, look, second, so, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 941.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.705 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45242227196 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1260819823 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.555555556 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2222222222 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.23603664747 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369262395625 0.215688989381 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153861730358 0.103423049105 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724562527373 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227275263728 0.15604864568 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0837702852113 0.0819641961636 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.86 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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