The bar chart below shows the top ten countries electricity production and consumption during 2014. Summaries the information by reporting main features and made comparison where possible
The following graph depicts the ten industrial countries manufacturing and utilization of electricity in 2014 on scale of billion k Wh.
As an overall trend during this year production and consumption of electric power was highest in China while Republic of Korea had lowest. Nevertheless, there was not significant difference between creation and usage of power except India and Canada.
A first glance at graph reveals that China and America electric power sector soar from rest of countries what it means that they almost consume all their energy produced. During this tenour China production and consumption was 5398 and 5322 billion k Wh and of United states was 4099 and 3866 billion k Wh respectively.
However, all the countries besides Russia power supply and manufacturing was below 1000 billion kwh. A significant difference between production and manufacturing shown by only two countries India and Canada of 100 billion kwh. And least manufacturing and utilization was observed in Korea of 485 and 449 billion kwh but Germany trends were conjecture with all above consumption was slightly higher than production about 50 billion kWh.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, however, if, nevertheless, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 6.8 235% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 970.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32967032967 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91937715127 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598901098901 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.739386338 43.030603864 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.571428571 112.824112599 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 5.23603664747 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133196695739 0.215688989381 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670994045318 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520333744798 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0953582997315 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260932478945 0.0819641961636 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.2329268293 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.