THE GRAPH BELOW SHOWS THE CONSUMPTION OF FISH AND SOME DIFFERENT KIND OF MEAT IN A EUROPEAN COUNTRY BETWEEN 1979 and 2004.sumarise the information by selecting and reporting main features and make comparison where revelant.
The presented graph enumerates the use of white and red meat in a European country science 1979 to 2004 grams per person per week.As an overall trend use of different type of meat and fish trends fluctuate greatly but consumption of chicken increased and fish and red meat decreased during this period.
According to graph fish remained least favorite food because its consumption was about fifty-five grams per person per week and at the end of this time frame decreased to fifty grams per person per week.Its was lowest consumption as compare to others.However,highest consumption of beef recorded during 1979 which dramatically raised up to two hundred and seventy-five grams per person per week till 1989.but onward to 2004 its use noticeably reduced almost hundred and with comparison chicken therefore one hundred and twenty-five gram per person per week.
Although lamb consumption was initially high with respect to chicken one fifty grams per person per week significantly drop to seventy-five gram per person per week in 2004.However,chicken whose first use was less than one fifty gram per person per week climbed considerably highest of all at two fifty grams per person per week in 2004.which almost hundred fold increased with comparison with it self.
In the end graph shows information of use of different type of meat and fish in which chicken utilization rocketed but other meat and fish plummeted.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: As
... 1979 to 2004 grams per person per week.As an overall trend use of different type ...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'remained the least'.
Suggestion: remained the least
...g this period. According to graph fish remained least favorite food because its consumption w...
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Suggestion: Its
...ased to fifty grams per person per week.Its was lowest consumption as compare to ot...
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Suggestion: was the lowest
... to fifty grams per person per week.Its was lowest consumption as compare to others.Howeve...
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Suggestion: However
...lowest consumption as compare to others.However,highest consumption of beef recorded du...
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Suggestion: , highest
...consumption as compare to others.However,highest consumption of beef recorded during 197...
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Suggestion: , the highest
...consumption as compare to others.However,highest consumption of beef recorded during 197...
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Suggestion: a hundred
... 2004 its use noticeably reduced almost hundred and with comparison chicken therefore o...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'gram' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'grams'.
Suggestion: grams
...n therefore one hundred and twenty-five gram per person per week. Although lamb con...
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...d twenty-five gram per person per week. Although lamb consumption was initially high wit...
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Suggestion: grams
...week significantly drop to seventy-five gram per person per week in 2004.However,chi...
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...y-five gram per person per week in 2004.However,chicken whose first use was less than o...
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Suggestion: , chicken
...gram per person per week in 2004.However,chicken whose first use was less than one fifty...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'gram' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'grams'.
Suggestion: grams
...whose first use was less than one fifty gram per person per week climbed considerabl...
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Suggestion: a hundred
...er person per week in 2004.which almost hundred fold increased with comparison with it ...
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Message: Did you mean 'itself'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, therefore, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1190.0 965.302439024 123% => OK
No of words: 230.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17391304348 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03241467355 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.469565217391 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 351.9 283.868780488 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 57.0 22.4926829268 253% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 148.520200646 43.030603864 345% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 297.5 112.824112599 264% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 57.5 22.9334400587 251% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.75 5.23603664747 263% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 1.69756097561 943% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126892125231 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132533941779 0.103423049105 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0855879628464 0.0843802449381 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132533941779 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0855879628464 0.0819641961636 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.7 13.2329268293 240% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 22.08 61.2550243902 36% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.3 10.3012195122 236% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.59 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 11.4329268293 236% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.8 10.9970731707 226% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 25.0 11.0658536585 226% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.