The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
the bar chart compares the electricity that produced or consumed between 10 countries around the world in 2014.
It is obvious that china and the united states are the most important countries that produced and consumed a lot of electricity. between 10 countries amount of production is a litter more than consumption except Germany.
the most important countries in produce and consume were china and the united states and produced 5398 billion kwh and 4099 billion kwh respectively.and according the amount of consumption the united states saved 233 billion kwh during 2014 and it was more than china's saving.these two countries consumption and production are 4 or 5 times more than other countries.
other countries like Russia, Japan, India, Canada, France, Brazil, Germany and Korea, Rep used less electricity in compare of the united state and china. the amount of electricity that these 10 countries produced were more than the amount of electricity they used except Germany and it means Germany could not save electricity in 2014.Korea, Rep was the most lowest country in production or consumption of electricity, just 485.1 billion kwh and 449.5 billion kwh respectively.
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- The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 6.8 235% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1008.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36170212766 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8904668397 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473404255319 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 294.3 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 107.818777998 43.030603864 251% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 168.0 112.824112599 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.3333333333 22.9334400587 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.0 5.23603664747 0% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15592505325 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0996282885059 0.103423049105 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509937124241 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12365204924 0.15604864568 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393734706162 0.0819641961636 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 13.2329268293 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 61.2550243902 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.3012195122 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.4 11.4140731707 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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