some people say history is one one the most important school subjects .other people think that in today's world ,subjects like science and technology are more important than history
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
people argued that history is one of the most important syllabus ,although others believe that nowadays other subjects like science and technology are more important than history, in my opinion both have their advantages but science and technology are crucial than history.
on the one hand, history has its advantages and no one can ignore the important roles that history has.by learning history you know more about different era and it cause to prevent to repeat some activities and do not need to experience things that experienced.furthermore understand the reason of something that happened,for example, why world war I began?and you can improve your knowledge about the past.and learn about different cultures and civilizations so you can communicate with other people around the world when you have enough information about their history.by studying history we gain some experience from our ancients so we learn how to confront to situation and adapt an approach to solve them.
on the other hand, people believe that some subjects are more important than history like science and technology.today is a technological era we need know knowledge, creativity,innovation and of course invention in diversity aspects of life .for example in these days internet and social media are very vital devices that use by people so it is obligatory to learn by students ,how to use them and how to improve them.meanwhile,today for convenient life we need new technology, science and technology have a big role in our life, i believe that we should encourage student to have a better relationship with science and technology.
In conclusion, history has some advantages but science and technology are far more important than history.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, while, for example, in conclusion, of course, you know, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33454545455 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25190141454 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523636363636 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 68.0 20.2975951904 335% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 249.211757347 49.4020404114 504% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 366.75 106.682146367 344% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 68.75 20.7667163134 331% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 28.5 7.06120827912 404% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.416374342855 0.244688304435 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.30106706808 0.084324248473 357% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107772120654 0.0667982634062 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.30106706808 0.151304729494 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107772120654 0.056905535591 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 38.0 13.0946893788 290% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -6.0 50.2224549098 -12% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.0 11.3001002004 274% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.82 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.51 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 29.2 10.1190380762 289% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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