The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

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The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

The bar chart represents the top ten countries producing and consuming electricity in the world in the year 2014. Production and consumption of electricity was measured in billion kWh.

Overall, the amount of electricity consumption is marginally less than its production in all countries except Germany. China was on the top with production and consumption of more than 5000 billion kWh of electricity in 2014. The United States of America got the second rank in electricity production and consumption. Fabrication is more than the consumption with the remaining amount of 233 billion kWh of electricity after their usage. Russia’s generation and utilization of electricity were four times less than the USA and five times less than China.

Remaining all counties like Japan, India, Canada, France, Brazil, Germany, and Korea produced and used less than 1000 billions kWh of electricity. Electricity production in France was approximately half as compared to Russia. Germany’s expenditure was more than its production. Korea, Rep was the country which produced and consumed the lowest amount of electricity in the year 2014. As compared to China, Korea, Rep produced and consumed approximately ten times lesser electricity in 2014.

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
second

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 3.97073170732 353% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1068.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.59162303665 4.92477711251 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14047107806 2.65546596893 118% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48167539267 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 323.1 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.197530238 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0909090909 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3636363636 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.545454545455 5.23603664747 10% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307167992536 0.215688989381 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140807349839 0.103423049105 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119286709285 0.0843802449381 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.278473571858 0.15604864568 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.142287311929 0.0819641961636 174% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 11.4140731707 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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