The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

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The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

The bar chart gives information concerning the top ten countries, including China, United States, Russia, Japan, India, Canada, France, Brazil, Germany, and the Republic of Korea, for the amount of produced and consumed electricity in 2014.

Overall, two countries (China and the United States) were dominant in the production and consumption of electricity over the world. Also, most of the production of electricity surpassed consumption.

Looking more closely at the bar graph, China was the biggest production and consumption of electricity; these figures were 5,398 and 5,322 billion kWh, respectively. The United States, likewise, produced and consumed electricity relatively higher than other countries; these figures were 4,099 and 3,866 billion kWh, respectively, also were about fourfold of Russia's. These two countries' totaled the amount of production and consumption were twofold of totaled other countries' amount.

On the other hand, the productions of electricity in all countries except for Germany exceeded the consumption; only the consumption of electricity in this country outweighed the production.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, likewise, look, so, except for, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 965.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.92024539877 4.92477711251 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99951694205 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552147239264 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3991296449 43.030603864 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.857142857 112.824112599 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 5.23603664747 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355817715342 0.215688989381 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165002996769 0.103423049105 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793385105597 0.0843802449381 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224337877954 0.15604864568 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527470459553 0.0819641961636 64% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.2329268293 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 61.2550243902 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.35 11.4140731707 152% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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