the bar chart compare the proportion of school boy in two separate age groups who took part in playing 5 kinds of sport in the UK in 2010.
overall, it can be seen that the percentage of boys 6-11 were generally more likely to play sport than the older group. In addition, football was the most popular type of sport for both age groups.
In particular, the rate for football in boys 6-11 group was 87%, compared to 78% of boys 12-16 groups. Meanwhile, that of basketball in boys 6-11 group was 35% followed by that of boys 12-16 groups, at 25%.
By comparison, boys 6-11 groups surpassed boys 12-16 group in the percentage for cricket with their figures being 45% and 34% respectively. However, the UK saw an equal proportion in both groups who spend their spare time for swimming, at 19%. While the rate for rugby in boys 6-11 group was 23%, that of boys 12-16 group was 21%
the bar chart compare the proportion of school boy in two separate age groups who took part in playing 5 kinds of sport in the UK in 2010.
overall, it can be seen that the percentage of boys 6-11 were generally more likely to play sport than the older group. In addition, football was the most popular type of sport for both age groups.
In particular, the rate for football in boys 6-11 group was 87%, compared to 78% of boys 12-16 groups. Meanwhile, that of basketball in boys 6-11 group was 35% followed by that of boys 12-16 groups, at 25%.
By comparison, boys 6-11 groups surpassed boys 12-16 group in the percentage for cricket with their figures being 45% and 34% respectively. However, the UK saw an equal proportion in both groups who spend their spare time for swimming, at 19%. While the rate for rugby in boys 6-11 group was 23%, that of boys 12-16 group was 21%
- Some people think scientific research should focus on solving world health problems Others think that there are more important issues Discuss both views and give your opinion 84
- The table shows the data on the proportion of schoolboys in two separate age groups who took part in playing 5 kinds of sport in the UK in the year 2010 Overall more schoolboys aged 6 11 years old are interested in playing sports than them in the older gr 90
- the bar chart compare the proportion of school boy in two separate age groups who took part in playing 5 kinds of sport in the UK in 2010 overall it can be seen that the percentage of boys 6 11 were generally more likely to play sport than the older group 61
- Some people think scientific research should focus on solving world health problems Others think that there are more important issues Discuss both views and give your opinion 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, while, in addition, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 721.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47826086957 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31311219384 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546583850932 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 187.2 283.868780488 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.0876148485 43.030603864 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.125 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.125 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.23603664747 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.546161790346 0.215688989381 253% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.280655820221 0.103423049105 271% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.224427434354 0.0843802449381 266% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.406196092704 0.15604864568 260% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.202985166689 0.0819641961636 248% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.02 61.2550243902 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.69 8.06136585366 83% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 40.7170731707 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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