The given bar chart reveal the information about how much British departure from England and choosed to location in five countries from 2004 to 2007.all the number given in thousands
To begin with, the number of British moving away towards Australia for destination in 2006 was highest, followed by Britishers for the same purpose in 2005 ,reported as around 52000 and around 49000, but in 2004 and 2005 withnessed as approximately 40000. Britishers selected Spain for location was on the par in 2004 and 2005 was around 34000, while in 2006 and 2007as reported to be around 33000 and 28000 respectively.
Moving further, nearly 22000 Britishers choose new Zealand in between 2004 to 2007. In 2004, Britishers selected USA for destination was more than 4000 as compare to 2005, whereas in 2006 registered to be about 24000 and in 2007 was 20000. Britishers choosed France for location in 2006 was surpassed by 2004, but left behind by the year of 2005 for same reason.
Overall, it is clearly seen that Britishers selected Australia for destination was more than as comparison with other countries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 156, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... Britishers for the same purpose in 2005 ,reported as around 52000 and around 4900...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... around 33000 and 28000 respectively. Moving further, nearly 22000 Britishers ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, whereas, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 954.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2131147541 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64367947711 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540983606557 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 118.613752247 43.030603864 276% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 159.0 112.824112599 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5 22.9334400587 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.23603664747 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250129969308 0.215688989381 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14290581186 0.103423049105 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04142513315 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161788660849 0.15604864568 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.019332537004 0.0819641961636 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.2329268293 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.41 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.53 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 11.4329268293 241% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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