In modern epoch, most people believe that
libraries should be provided by authority at free of cost in each town and village, however other says that it is totally waste of capital because everybody get data in home with the help of websites. This essay will explain both views. I think former point of view is better than later.
On the one hand, there are ample of merits for every individual, if free libraries provided by administration in every nation.
First, every individual enhance their knowledge as a consequence of liabraries. To explain it, if free book room
provided by administration in every village, then poor masses know about so many things. Furthermore, reading habit also develop with proper sitting and facilities. Liabraries not only enhance knowledge, but also improve concentration power. For instance, according to BBC survey, 2018 in Vietnam. This survey reveals the data about the increasing percentage of exam result from 72% to 87% owing to authority establish free book point in every village. Therefore, liabraries is crucial for everybody in life.
On the other hand, bunch of capital is required to build free liabraries in the nation. Some individual believe that every data collect from the internet, so there is no need to built free libraries. First of all, mobile phones Play an important role in life. Everybody learn and read in smartphones nowadays. They says that no one come to learn new things in liabraries due to they get all data in home
with electronic gadgets. To epitome, according to Oxford University research, 2017 in america. It depicts the data, IQ level does not increase, while providing free education with library. Thus, they believe that the expanditure on liabraries is waste of money rather than investment.
In conclusion, when it comes to free liabraries, it is more beneficial for pupils and also for masses. I think it is a big investment which give better result in upcoming time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, then, therefore, thus, while, for instance, i think, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1696.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25077399381 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74219878399 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582043343653 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.0272782024 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.7619047619 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.380952381 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184222020691 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0427307287611 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565988232373 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.082819594122 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.051887648274 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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