The bar chart illustrates about five countries emigrated by people of United kingdom, in the period of 2004 to 2007. The measurement is in thousands of people.
Overall, It is clearly evident that Australia was most popular place for emigrations. And least of countries was New Zealand and USA.
In detail, about 40,000 emigrants moved to Australia in 2004 and it dropped by following year. In 2006, number were peaked to 52,000 followed by drop of approximately about 10,000 in the next year. Similarly, Spain experienced same number of emigrants during 2004 and 2005 about 32,000. It has gradually declined in 2006 and end up at 28,000 in 2007. New Zealand and USA chosen by approximately about 20,000 emigrants in whole timeline, with least number of emigrants about 18,000 in 2006.
France in 2004 emigrated by 22,000 English people, then the number rose to peak in 2005 followed by gradual decrease in the following two years with number of 18,000 in 2007.
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...nd end up at 28,000 in 2007. New Zealand and USA chosen by approximately about 20...
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...out 20,000 emigrants in whole timeline, with least number of emigrants about 18,000 in 200...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
similarly, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 811.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00617283951 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64103046449 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 223.2 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7525483033 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.1 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 5.23603664747 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102529035951 0.215688989381 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0483996548518 0.103423049105 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054692174939 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0746791168583 0.15604864568 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585857764888 0.0819641961636 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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