Imported foods are gaining popularity than locally produced foods . This heated issue is more common among all countries. People choose imported foreign products rather than local food products. There are many manifold reasons for this trend. If the government takes necessary steps or actions , it can improve the sales of locally produced food products and vegetables.
First and fore most, people prefer imported products than local food items. They hold a believe that foreign products and commodities are good in quality and better in every aspect. Every product with foreign brand tag will be better compared to local products. Nowdays , this has becoming trend among people. Secondly, people are cautious of hygiene and health foods. Locally produced foods are spoiled and illegally sold in the local markets.
The government should take action against these illegally produced food products and supervise local marktes for selling rotton meat and vegetables. Public department should create awareness program that illustrates impacts of buying foreign products and items mainly affects economy.Also, They should promote the idea of buying locally produced foods with trust.
In crux, government must take an initiative to reduce this issue and take appropriate steps to improve quality of local products.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: belief
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 41.998997996 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1120.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 199.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62814070352 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42558092005 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 176.041082164 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592964824121 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.7096537832 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2142857143 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.64285714286 7.06120827912 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373261884667 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141204605524 0.084324248473 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13459427859 0.0667982634062 201% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213501495358 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.143492479441 0.056905535591 252% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.78 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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