The bar chart compares the sales of four various types of electronic games around the globe over the course of seven years, starting from 2000 to 2006. Units are measured in billions of US dollars.
Overall, it can be observed that worldwide sales for most of the digital games experienced an upward trend, except for console games. Handheld games had the highest number in terms of the sales throughout this period which was at least double any other games.
According to the chart, in 2000, the sales figure for handheld games was close to 11 billion dollars, this figure experienced dramatic growth and reached its peak at slightly under 18 billion dollars, keeping it the most popular games among other platforms. On the contrary, console games initially sold a large quantity of precisely 6 billion dollars, which was 2 times lower than the sales of console games at the same time. However, there was a decline in selling console games as it continued to drop to hit its lowest point of less than 3 billion dollars in 2006.
Global sales of online and mobile phone games followed a similar pattern. Even though, both of them appeared later in the global market later than the others but those sales were increasing annually. In 2002, those two games registered the same figures of around 1.5 billion dollars. Over the next 6 years, the increase was seen in sales revenues of both types of games about 8 and 9 billion dollars respectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, at least, except for, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1206.0 965.302439024 125% => OK
No of words: 249.0 196.424390244 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84337349398 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34196813835 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 106.607317073 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574297188755 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 283.868780488 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9819866473 43.030603864 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.636363636 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6363636364 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351364425217 0.215688989381 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134373400088 0.103423049105 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640429798064 0.0843802449381 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214487042163 0.15604864568 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626301031978 0.0819641961636 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 40.7170731707 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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