the bar chart shows the global sales (in billions of dollars) of different types of digital games between 2000 and 2006.
the bar graph compares four various types of digital games in terms of the sales of them around the globe over the course of 7 years, starting in 2000.
overall, we can obviously see that the general trend of digital games' sales was increasing annually with the exception of console games. During the period, it is obvious that handheld games registered the highest sales which was at least double any of other games.
according to the chart, handheld games were experienced dramatic growth keeping it the most popular games among other game types. Handheld games were sold nearly 12 billion in 2000 then rose quickly 18 billions in 2006. Even though, online games and mobile phone games appeared later in the global market later than the others but those inclined steadily over the years. in 2002, those two games registered the same figures around 1.5 billions. the next 6 years, the increase was seen in selling those two games about 8 and 9 billions, respectively.
In comparison, in 2000, handhold games were sold a large quantity with precisely 6 billions, which was 2 times lower than the sales of console games at the same time. However, there was a decline in selling console games with more or less than 3 billionss in 2006.
- the chart show the amount of time that 10 to 15-years-olds spend chatting on the Internet and playing on the games consoles on the average school day in the UK. 84
- The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone call in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002. 73
- The bar graph shows the global sales (in billions of dollars) of different types of digital games between 2000 and 2006. 78
- The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone call in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002.Summarise the information by selecting a reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
- the bar chart shows the global sales (in billions of dollars) of different types of digital games between 2000 and 2006. 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
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the bar graph compares four various types o...
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...course of 7 years, starting in 2000. overall, we can obviously see that the general ...
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Suggestion: except; except for
...tal games sales was increasing annually with the exception of console games. During the period, it is...
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... at least double any of other games. according to the chart, handheld games were exper...
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Suggestion: In
...those inclined steadily over the years. in 2002, those two games registered the sa...
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...d the same figures around 1.5 billions. the next 6 years, the increase was seen in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, then, at least, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 32.9175257732 27% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1033.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84976525822 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30743412533 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596244131455 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 28.7569122125 44.8134815571 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.3 76.5299724578 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3 16.8248392259 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280268060045 0.216113520407 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114374754566 0.0766984524023 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605993000936 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171024451308 0.12726935374 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049354970417 0.0580467560999 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 8.37731958763 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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