The column chart delineates the quantity of weekly working duration that males and females spend on their occupation in the year 2007.
Looking from an overall perspective, it is obvious that the majority of individuals in both genders allocate their time to work about 30-50 hours per week, meanwhile, those who were work below 10 hours per week were in the minority.
As is presented in the chart, it can be seen that a higher percentage of women who work under 20 hours per week, almost doubled in comparison with men, 15% with the figure for under 10 and 22% with the figure for the 10-20 group. In addition, the figure for both genders was equal in the quantity of people who work over 80 hours weekly, approximately 10% of the total population.
Turning to the number of residents who work in the 30-50 and 50-80 hours per week cohorts, we can also see that the proportion of males was noticeably higher than females. Particularly, nearly 45% and 30% of men work weekly 30-50 and 50-80 hours respectively, meanwhile, the females in these two groups work 35% and 28% in turn.
- The bar chart shows the number of hours worked by men women per week in Australia in 2007 Summarise information by selecting and reporting main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emission which result from this energy use Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make compar
- The maps below shows the development of a particular area from 1965 to present day 78
- The graph below gives information abouth the percentage of population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020 with predictions for 2030 and 2040 89
- The map shows the changes to a residence hall between 2010 and the present 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 895.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68586387435 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.510491677 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560209424084 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.225936512 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.166666667 112.824112599 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.8333333333 22.9334400587 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.23603664747 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22455475871 0.215688989381 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11863222437 0.103423049105 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0328218970792 0.0843802449381 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140010092935 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00937210929327 0.0819641961636 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.39 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.