The bar chart shows the percentage of international students enrolled in British universities in two years 1990 and 2014

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The bar chart shows the percentage of international students enrolled in British universities in two years, 1990 and 2014.

The bar chart illustrates the percentile of enrollment of foreign students in ten different universities in the British in 2009 and 2014.

Overall, international students have increased in the British during the year 2014 as compared to 2009. Brighton university enrolled highest number of students in both the years whereas Huddersfield university was the least chosen by international pupils in 2009 as compared to Cardif in 2014.

In terms of Brighton university, which is popular among students in both 2009 and 2014, the enrollment has risen by only 1%. Similarly, in Leeds, Bristol, and Manchester universities, there is a slightest increase in foreign scholars. Furthermore, Cardiff university remains the only institute where the students have increased by 1%. In addition, Liverpool university have same percentage in both years.

On the contrary, percentage of students studying in Edinborough has doubled to 6% in 2014. In Huddersfield university, this percentile has increased from 1% to 3%. Moreover, Birmingham university replaced Leeds university and became more popular among students as it has the second highest enrollments of 12% in 2014 while 8% in 2009.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 125, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'enrolled the highest'.
Suggestion: enrolled the highest
...s compared to 2009. Brighton university enrolled highest number of students in both the years wh...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 194, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
..., and Manchester universities, there is a slightest increase in foreign scholars....
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, second, similarly, whereas, while, in addition, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1003.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54143646409 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1527749082 2.65546596893 119% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530386740331 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.5201279316 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.3 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.23603664747 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.399664319646 0.215688989381 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16226904747 0.103423049105 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112947602791 0.0843802449381 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.273853911121 0.15604864568 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0844633177077 0.0819641961636 103% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 11.4140731707 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 125, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'enrolled the highest'.
Suggestion: enrolled the highest
...s compared to 2009. Brighton university enrolled highest number of students in both the years wh...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 194, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
..., and Manchester universities, there is a slightest increase in foreign scholars....
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, second, similarly, whereas, while, in addition, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1003.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54143646409 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1527749082 2.65546596893 119% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530386740331 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.5201279316 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.3 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.23603664747 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.399664319646 0.215688989381 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16226904747 0.103423049105 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112947602791 0.0843802449381 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.273853911121 0.15604864568 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0844633177077 0.0819641961636 103% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 11.4140731707 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.