The bar graph provides information on the population levels of four different countries (India, China, the USA, and Japan) in 1950 and 2002, and depicts respective forecasts for 2050.
Overall, China is the most densely populated country in 1950 and 2002 with India, the USA, and Japan following, respectively. However, as it is shown in the graph, the percentage of China will have dropped significantly, and India will be on the rise consisting the most crowded in the terms of citizens' country.
Looking at the graph in more detail, China and Japan follow a similar downward trend. In particular, China’s population starts in 1950 at around 23 percent, and by the end of 2050 is estimated to have decreased to 15%. On equal footing, the ratio of citizens in Japan is in decline and in 2050 is projected to have dropped at almost 2 percent.
Commencing with the ratio of the population in India in 1950 and 2001 was 15% and 17%, respectively. similarly, it will be shown the highest ratio is 2050, which will show near about 20%. However, the percentage of the population in 1959 was near about 25%, as compared to 20 in 2002. while in 2050 will be decreased slightly at given of period.
furthermore, in 2002 and 2050, the proposition is analogous, which is exactly 5%. But also the rose rato in 1950 compare to present year. likewise, the dramatic lowest was observed in the rate of population from 1950 to 2050, it is collected a between 1% to5%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...50 to 2050, it is collected a between 1% to5%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, likewise, look, similarly, so, while, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 33.7804878049 148% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1204.0 965.302439024 125% => OK
No of words: 254.0 196.424390244 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74015748031 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70989717279 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 106.607317073 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503937007874 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 350.1 283.868780488 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 0.482926829268 1242% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0495058269 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6153846154 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 5.23603664747 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29797727909 0.215688989381 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104647142002 0.103423049105 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764024968072 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173898951134 0.15604864568 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0767003779541 0.0819641961636 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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