it is no denying fact the car is a tremendously significant role in the existing time. In the modern era, the majority of individual keen to purchase more cars in today time. This essay intends to present the advantage of computers. However, I believe assert I believe advantage drawback the worthwhile.
commencing with the sole disadvantage of purchase to car. Although, the trend of the car has more worthwhile, yet we cannot ignore the awful effect of this trend on the environments. Since nowadays majority of individual buy more cars that increase of pollution day by day compared to past few decade years. However, car not only burgeoning pollution in the world but also shows the bad impact on poverty. The excessive purchase cars, the more drawbacks for increate for everyone. Ergo, owing to face many difficulties by people for people gain more accident and disease.
Furthermore, there are certain merits adhered to purchase cars. firstly, it is vehicle more help the people in hectic schedule life. Since, they are more retrospective, due they can not wait for the public transformation. In fact that despite they keen on buying their vehicle. For example, it is clear the majority of individual doing business outside factories. There time are fixing, due to their need of approach of time and they are wait of anyone.
To conclude, I pen down saying that excess of everything is bad, so human ought to limit the role or car in their lives and try to use public transportatio .
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
it is no denying fact the car is a tremend...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Commencing
...e advantage drawback the worthwhile. commencing with the sole disadvantage of purchase ...
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Line 3, column 184, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...fect of this trend on the environments. Since nowadays majority of individual buy mor...
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Line 5, column 65, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Firstly
...ertain merits adhered to purchase cars. firstly, it is vehicle more help the people in ...
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Line 7, column 156, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ives and try to use public transportatio .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, while, for example, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1247.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94841269841 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79500025649 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579365079365 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.5376927209 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.3529411765 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8235294118 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94117647059 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330403359434 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0950560516839 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733012120883 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166983217594 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105921419717 0.056905535591 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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