The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over four different
seasons. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main
features and make comparisons where relevant.
<p style="border: 0px; font-family: "Open Sans", sans-serif; font-size: 13px; margin-bottom: 1.5em; outline: 0px; padding: 0px; vertical-align: baseline; color: rgb(102, 102, 102); white-space: normal;">The chart compares the points scored by three different teams over a four-year period from 2002 to 2005.</p><p style="border: 0px; font-family: "Open Sans", sans-serif; font-size: 13px; margin-bottom: 1.5em; outline: 0px; padding: 0px; vertical-align: baseline; color: rgb(102, 102, 102); white-space: normal;">Overall, it is clear that there was a fluctuation in the scores of all the teams during the period shown. Also, the points scored by team B were significantly higher than the scores of the other teams.</p><p style="border: 0px; font-family: "Open Sans", sans-serif; font-size: 13px; margin-bottom: 1.5em; outline: 0px; padding: 0px; vertical-align: baseline; color: rgb(102, 102, 102); white-space: normal;">In 2002, team B achieved its highest total, 82 points. In contrast, the figures for team A and team C were noticeably lower than the scores of team B, which were 5 and 10 points, respectively. The period between 2002 and 2004 witnessed a dramatic increase in the scores of team A, reaching a peak of 35 points in 2004. The totals of team C remained relatively stable at between 10 and 15 points, whereas the scores of team B fell steadily from their peak in 2002 to a low figure of 43 points in 2004.</p><p style="border: 0px; font-family: "Open Sans", sans-serif; font-size: 13px; margin-bottom: 1.5em; outline: 0px; padding: 0px; vertical-align: baseline; color: rgb(102, 102, 102); white-space: normal;">There was then a rise in the team B score to 55 points in 2005. On the other hand, team A saw a fall in its score to 8 points, slightly higher than team C with 5 points.</p>
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, whereas, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1603.0 965.302439024 166% => OK
No of words: 274.0 196.424390244 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.8503649635 4.92477711251 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.0373492717 2.65546596893 152% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.43795620438 0.547539520022 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 390.6 283.868780488 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 22.4926829268 200% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 205.322307604 43.030603864 477% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 267.166666667 112.824112599 237% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 45.6666666667 22.9334400587 199% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 5.23603664747 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0999191240299 0.215688989381 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0783720146911 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0205424903556 0.0843802449381 24% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0999191240299 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.0 13.2329268293 219% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 61.2550243902 70% => OK
smog_index: 14.6 6.51609756098 224% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 10.3012195122 180% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.54 11.4140731707 154% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 32.0 11.4329268293 280% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.0 10.9970731707 182% => OK
text_standard: 29.0 11.0658536585 262% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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