The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over four different
seasons. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main
features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart compares the points of three teams, Team A, team B, team C in the course of 4 years, from 2002 to 2005.
Overall, Team B topped the list during the surveyed period while team A and team C had lower scores than those of team B.
In 2002, team A gained 5 points, which was by half of team C, with 10 points. In 2004, it was noted that team A climbed significantly to 35 points, in contrast, team C dropped slightly to 12 points after reaching its peak at 15 points in 2003. In 2005, the points of team A were 8, which was higher than those of team C, a difference of 3 points.
A striking feature is team B. In 2002, team B became a scorer at 82 points, compared to the results of team A and team C, with 5 points and 10 points, respectively. In 2004, team B lost its momentum and reached its rock bottom at 43 points. It is obvious that team B showed a gathered pace and made a recovery at 56 points at the end of the survey.
- The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010. 73
- Many people today especially in the developed world are choosing to have fewer children or none at all Why is this happening and do you think it is a good trend 68
- The graph below shows female unemployment rates in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014. 78
- The graph below shows the percentage of people going to cinemas in one European country on different days. 61
- The pie charts below give data on the spending and consumption of resources by countries of the world and how the population is distributed. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 245, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...reaching its peak at 15 points in 2003. In 2005, the points of team A were 8, whic...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 764.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.02105263158 4.92477711251 82% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29526792502 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505263157895 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 192.6 283.868780488 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.0 1.45097560976 69% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9353790047 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8888888889 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1111111111 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.44444444444 5.23603664747 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150706686023 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852999294435 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406058684351 0.0843802449381 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123399367631 0.15604864568 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340704538058 0.0819641961636 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.2329268293 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 100.92 61.2550243902 165% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 10.3012195122 43% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.04 11.4140731707 53% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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