The given diagrams show the figures about average house cost in England and London, as well as comparing the prices between six different ares of England.
Overall, the money had to be paid for a house in London was always higher, compared to the country. Another, the housing payment of that city costed the most while the lowest one could be found in North East.
In 1995, the average expenditure of a house in London was 200000 pounds, considerably more than England’s price. Over an eight-year period, London’s house value increased enormously, then reached to more than 400000 pounds, more than twice country’s average.
Regarding the costliness, North East and Midlands were two places having striking difference with four other areas, just wasted around 100.000 to 150.000 pounds while the citizens in London had to spend 400.000 pounds for housing. At the middle of list were South East, South West and North West with approximate 310.000p, 260.000p and 200.000p respectively
- The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries 61
- The two maps show the main changes which have taken place in the wotn of Castellon between the year 2000 and today 78
- Some people think that there is a great influence of news media on people s lives and this is a negative development Do you agree or disagree with this statement Give your opinion and relevant examples 56
- The bar charts illustrate the average house expenses in England and its capital city London and to present the comparison regarding the average house prices between distinct areas of England within the year 2013 89
- The bar charts illustrate the average house expenses in England and its capital city London and to present the comparison regarding the average house prices between distinct areas of England within the year 2013 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 118, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...derably more than England’s price. Over a eight-year period, London’s house value...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 836.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.225 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54840636477 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675 0.547539520022 123% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0150604679 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.428571429 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 5.23603664747 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225769704668 0.215688989381 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116746741063 0.103423049105 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107333320521 0.0843802449381 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15207604645 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105168658502 0.0819641961636 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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