Some people think that there is a great influence of news media on people’s lives and this is a negative development. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion and relevant examples.
It is argued that the development of tidings mediacould be harmful for people’s lives due to the fact by its focus on sensationalism to attract public attention. This tendency has both positive and negative impacts therefore. I partly agree with the given idea.
On the one hand, the news presenting pessimisticaspects of society were proven to be detrimental effects on people’s mental state. For instance, various of information about terrorism can stimulate the frightened in the public, making them afraid to travel abroad. Secondly, the higher rate at occupation can also pump into people’s thought the misunderstanding about manysides within society. For example, a numerous scandal of celebrities have become common in the media by aggravating factors from the tabloids leading the skepticism about artists.
In other side, the focus on negative tidings rather than optimistic ones is beneficialin someway. Ordinarily, citizens will be less alert about potential social issues, compared to be awakened by mass news on the media. Case in point, news about corona viruses had been spreaded out at breakneck speed, and as a result, a huge amount of human have focused on healthier lifestyle.
To sum up, there are legitimate reasons for the media to report on all issues, although the accompanying negativeimpacts need to be considered
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 102, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rmful for people’s lives due to the fact by its focus on sensationalism to attrac...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1140.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 211.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4028436019 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10854233066 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.696682464455 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9774251256 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.636363636 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1818181818 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.36363636364 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147686804322 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548831277426 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383348809629 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0863539073253 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643701946002 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.49 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.