The bar graph above shows average earning in the republic of Ireland in 5 different years, with projections for the future.
The given bar graph illustrates a statistical data regarding the wages of people in Ireland in five different years, and given estimation for future salary in 2020.
Overall, from the fleeting glance it is vivid that salary of people was increasing after every decades except 2008. But, it is predicted that it will shoot up in 2020.
It can be seen that, in 1968, income of people was just below $8000. After a decades, it inclined to around $10,000. Furthermore, ten years later, in 1988, earning of people rose up to approximately $13,000. Moreover, in 1998, salary of people increased to nearly $15,000.
Probing ahead, in 2008, income of Ireland's people suddenly dropped down to near about $14,000. It is estimated that, in 2020 average income will increase and boost up to above $16,000.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 74, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a decade' or simply 'decades'?
Suggestion: a decade; decades
...ome of people was just below 000. After a decades, it inclined to around 0,000. Furthermo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 657.0 965.302439024 68% => OK
No of words: 134.0 196.424390244 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90298507463 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.40232815919 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48328114207 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.65671641791 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 194.4 283.868780488 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7150659292 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.0 112.824112599 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8888888889 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 5.23603664747 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116359699804 0.215688989381 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0430092247909 0.103423049105 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675093262339 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0798593982079 0.15604864568 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0842921867665 0.0819641961636 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.2329268293 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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