The bar graph below shows the active membership of private sector occupational pension scheme by benefit structure in the UK, 2007 to 2014.
The bar graph represents the number of British people who are a member of private sector occupational pension schemes by benefits and contributions from 2007 to 2014.
Overall, while the occupational pension scheme decreased with its memberships over the projected periods, the contribution from the members had increased continuously.
In terms of benefits made by pension schemes, it recorded at about 2.8 million in 2007 as the highest benefits in the given periods, followed by 2008’s benefits of 2.7 million and 2.6 million benefits in 2009. As time passes by, the amount of benefits experienced a constant plummet to reach at about 1.7 million benefits in 2012 and which amount had not changed for the last two consecutive years.
In contrast, contribution made by private sector occupational pension scheme witnessed a drastic incremental trend despite the periodic fluctuations. First five years, the contribution made by members had fluctuated in its amount but it always remained at below a million. Since 2013, the contribution amount had risen steadily to above 1.3 million from British members, its amount grew substantially to over 3 million contributions by 2014.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'while', 'in contrast']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.243902439024 0.268076937826 91% => OK
Verbs: 0.117073170732 0.116061578633 101% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0731707317073 0.0759168565197 96% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0292682926829 0.0366838410393 80% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0243902439024 0.0131127313244 186% => OK
Prepositions: 0.175609756098 0.155750635184 113% => OK
Participles: 0.0536585365854 0.0379272487307 141% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.05069894637 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Infinitives: 0.019512195122 0.0210936926555 93% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0829268292683 0.0948980150116 87% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00975609756098 0.00967000014798 101% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1189.0 1161.00487805 102% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.9 94% => OK
Chars per words: 6.42702702703 5.90752243213 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73763899035 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.437837837838 0.337110787985 130% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.351351351351 0.247514529752 142% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.232432432432 0.171178102325 136% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.12972972973 0.112407865282 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05069894637 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556756756757 0.546246751206 102% => OK
Word variations: 49.0988817531 49.3433353143 100% => OK
How many sentences: 7.0 8.93414634146 78% => OK
Sentence length: 26.4285714286 23.0094962315 115% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.7444443973 42.9750493124 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 169.857142857 135.714022679 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4285714286 23.0094962315 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.571428571429 0.689975730869 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.48048780488 0% => OK
Readability: 61.5637065637 47.7609492067 129% => OK
Elegance: 2.77142857143 2.94281807926 94% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.450045144623 0.418131533498 108% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.182558015491 0.181151798455 101% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.109896155705 0.0850326197045 129% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.785639871321 0.706616315825 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.173127513816 0.157042692854 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.253353559949 0.228904883108 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102944114542 0.108899403657 95% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.229613637421 0.367819155151 62% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0646981877674 0.0812612215331 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.324974542763 0.316326947829 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0783883898671 0.0921553760075 85% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70731707317 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.08536585366 73% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 3.16585365854 126% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 3.02926829268 99% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 7.1512195122 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.