The carbon emission has been one of the most serious problem leading to environmental degradation. The bar graph depicts a clear picture of emissions in various countries, with respect to three different years.
USA and China has experienced drastic rise in carbon emission over years, With USA having highest amount of 1,200,000 in the year 1975, approximately 1,300,000 in the year 1990 and 1,600,000 metric tonnes in the year 2005, while China experiencing similar condition with it's peak emission rate of approximately 1,500,000 in the year 2005 and least of 300,000 in the year 1975.
Canada and India has undergone considerable rise, but less compared to the previous ones. With India having it's highest value of 350,000 metric tonnes in the year 2005 and least value of approx. 100,000 in the year 1975. On the other hand, Germany and United Kingdom has played a prominent role in maintaining their environment, by controlling carbon emission over increasing years from 1975 to 2005. Germany has been successful in reducing the emission rate from 200,000 in the year 1975 to 50,000 in the year 2005. Whereas United Kingdoms have both their highest and lowest emission rates of about 100,000 metric tonnes in 1975 and 2005.
Overall, we can say that developed countries have failed in controlling their environmental degradation, while constantly developing countries like Germany, United Kingdom, Canada and India have tried to maintain their emission rates.
- If a person is given a choice between life without work and working a lot he would prefer to have a life without work Do you agree or disagree 61
- The diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the process of making matches Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 84
- These days some people spend a lot of money on tickets to go to sporting or cultural events Do you think this is a positive or negative development 73
- The bar graph below shows the amount of carbon emissions in different countries during three different years Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 172, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cture of emissions in various countries, with respect to three different years. ...
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Line 3, column 84, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'having the highest'.
Suggestion: having the highest
...in carbon emission over years, With USA having highest amount of 1,200,000 in the year 1975, a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, whereas, while, with respect to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1241.0 965.302439024 129% => OK
No of words: 234.0 196.424390244 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30341880342 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69862574367 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525641025641 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 92.9410565896 43.030603864 216% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 124.1 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 5.23603664747 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145993190048 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679470051586 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531427682764 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106068375013 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549378688504 0.0819641961636 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.2329268293 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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