Now a days, sporting or cultural events have become popular among youth due to the wide range of entertainment and oppurtunities it presents before them. It is very prominent in positive development among youngsters. It creates a sense of motivation in their minds to learn new skills a present it in front of crowds, hence helping them enhance their socializing character and also physical and mental growth respectively.
Sporting events are the ones where different skilled athletes and sportsmen gather to compete and prove themselves to people watching them. Keeping their victory as goals in their minds, they practice hard and explore their full potential to learn and excel in the sports they are going to play. This in turn reflects in their career life as well as in educational life. In this way they develop their physical and mental strengths.
Similarly, cultural events also provide a platform for youngsters to demonstrate their skills such as dancing, singing, playing musical instruments and dramas. This promotes development of their creativity and interacting skills as there is a necessity for them to communicate and share their ideas to complete a act or even choreograph a dance because co-ordination among contestants is the main tool here. In this way they make it a practice to follow what they learn in the process.
In my opinion, both sporting as well as cultural events are very significant in youth development. In order to promote these, schools and colleges must make it compulsory for all the students to participate in such events and make sure at least these are conducted twice in a year. Government can also actively promote these events, by organizing campaigns to educate people about the advantages of these events and also by passing laws which help raise funds for organizing these events in underdeveloped or rural areas.
In conclusion, we can say that, it is important for all to develop a positive attitude towards such events and do our best to encourage younsters participate in all such ocassions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
Now a days, sporting or cultural events have becom...
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Line 1, column 5, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
Now a days, sporting or cultural events have becom...
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Line 5, column 312, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...icate and share their ideas to complete a act or even choreograph a dance because...
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Line 7, column 30, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...rocess. In my opinion, both sporting as well as cultural events are very significant in...
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Line 7, column 100, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... very significant in youth development. In order to promote these, schools and col...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, similarly, so, well, as to, at least, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1725.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13392857143 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85591336393 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544642857143 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.7388605727 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.214285714 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201094593304 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727910179907 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352894268529 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107938055008 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312867797355 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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