The bar graph below shows the average earnings in Ireland in 5 different years, with projections for future.eranings are in Us dollars ($).
The bar graph compares the typical income in Ireland between 1977 and 2017 and predicted figure in 2027. Units are measured in US dollars.
Overall, the average earnings of people living in Ireland increased dramatically over a 40 year period and this trend is forecast to continue after a decade.
The amount of money earned of Ireland residents started at just under $8,000 in 1977, after which this number rose to around $10,000 in 1987. The figure went up continuously to nearly $13,000 in 1997 and hit a peak of roughly $15,000 in 2007, then subsequently dropped slightly by about $ 1,000 in 2017.
By 2027, it is set that inhabitants of Ireland will have their highest income in the recorded time. The figure of earnings will hit a hight of just over $17,000, which is less than three fold of the income people had at the beginning of the period.
- The pie charts below show the spending of a school in the UK from 1981 to 2001 82
- The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four modes of transport. 84
- Some people believe that no homework should be given to children. Others, however, say that extra work is needed after school in order for them to succeed. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 56
- Some people believe that the government should make university education free for all Others disagree and say that students should pay for their own education 78
- The bar graph below shows the average earnings in Ireland in 5 different years, with projections for future.eranings are in Us dollars ($). 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 71, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... Ireland residents started at just under ,000 in 1977, after which this number ro...
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Line 9, column 76, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and residents started at just under ,000 in 1977, after which this number rose to...
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Line 9, column 282, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$1'.
Suggestion: $1
... subsequently dropped slightly by about $ 1,000 in 2017. By 2027, it is set th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 707.0 965.302439024 73% => OK
No of words: 150.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71333333333 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37976057269 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646666666667 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 202.5 283.868780488 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4019618977 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.571428571429 5.23603664747 11% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116357263808 0.215688989381 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059654487792 0.103423049105 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038548988595 0.0843802449381 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0806350946213 0.15604864568 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439377724181 0.0819641961636 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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