The charts below give information about the amount and types of water in the world and also tell the use of water in three countries

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The charts below give information about the amount and types of water in the world and also tell the use of water in three countries.

The pie charts compare the total percentage and kinds of water in the earth while the bar graph shows the reasons for water consumption in the three nations.

Overall, among the total water in the world, fresh water only makes up a very small proportion of this and is mainly found as glaciers and permanent snows. It is also noticeable that the primary reason for water consumption in Saudi Arabia and Egypt is on agriculture, while in Canada it is for industrial purposes.

The total amount of fresh water on earth is only 2.5% whereas the saline water comprised the vast majority. With regard to the sources of fresh water, less than three-quarters of it is stored as frozen water and a significant proportion of around 30% could be seen as fresh underground water. The figures for the underground ice and renewable water are both just under 1%.

Saudi Arabia consumed the biggest percentage of its water supply on agriculture at exactly half, followed by Egypt and Canada at 40% and 30% respectively. Canada's use of water for industrial reasons had by far the most figure at approximately 35%. The similarity in these nations is that they spent the least amount of water for domestic purposes.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, whereas, while, with regard to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1001.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85922330097 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66297866459 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553398058252 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2665336411 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.222222222 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8888888889 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295050293856 0.215688989381 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135176914608 0.103423049105 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475852985974 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190059963189 0.15604864568 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335250650723 0.0819641961636 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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