The bar graph below shows the average housing costs in three different regions for two different areas. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting in the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph shows the average cost of housing in rural, urban and suburban areas in 2005 and 2015. Units are measured in dollars.
Overall, the average housing cost for urban and suburban areas is higher than rural areas for 2005 and 2015. They rose significantly in all three regions in the period shown in the bar graph. However, the housing costs for all three areas were different for the entire period.
It can be observed from the bar graph a significant difference between the average housing cost in all three areas in 2005 and 2015. In 2005, the average housing cost for urban was around 150,000, and for suburban areas, it was around 100,000, whereas the lowest was 75,000 for rural areas. Thus, a difference of 75,000 existed between the cost of the urban area and rural area in 2005. But the difference in 2015 amounted to 175,000 in 2015, which was significantly greater than in 2005. Thus, the average housing cost in urban areas is rising at a much higher rate than in rural areas.
Housing costs rose for all three areas in 2005 and 2015. The average price for rural areas increased from 75,000 to 125,000. Average urban areas cost almost doubled, going from 150,000 to 300,000. Also, the average housing costs for suburban areas elevated from 100,000 to 275,000, virtually tripling in values.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 8, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'observe'
Suggestion: observe
...ifferent for entire period. It can observed from the bar graph, a significant diffe...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...was significantly greater than in 2005. Thus it can be observed that the average hou...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...doubled, going from 150,000 to 300,000. Also the average housing costs for suburban ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...n areas elevated from 100,000 to 275,000 , that is almost tripling in values.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, whereas, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1080.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 226.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77876106195 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.12680910454 2.65546596893 80% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.393805309735 0.547539520022 72% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 303.3 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.171812355 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.1428571429 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1428571429 22.9334400587 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.85714285714 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294047952733 0.215688989381 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15587962481 0.103423049105 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.083362044545 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236110559608 0.15604864568 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478943495319 0.0819641961636 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 61.2550243902 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.67 8.06136585366 83% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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