The bar graph depicts, on how many numbers of male and female research students studied six computer science subjects at US university in 2011.A glance at graph reveals the fact that more number of men students studied when compared to women students.
It is clear from graph, all the men studied phycology, mathematics and natural sciences and all women studied natural sciences. Around 150 men students studied Engineering and programming ; whereas linguistics is studied by approximately 80 men students. As is presented more number of men studied all the languages , except linguistics is studied more by female. After natural sciences , psychology is studied by most of women students and very less number of students studied mathematics . On the other hand only 70 to 80 women student studied Engineering and programming, that is almost half of men students.
To recapitulate,all the subjects are studied more by men when compared to women. Natural sciences is the only subject studied by all the students in the university.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...d natural sciences and all women studied natural sciences. Around 150 men student...
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the women') or simply say ''most women''.
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...s number of students studied mathematics . On the other hand only 70 to 80 women s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
whereas, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 869.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2987804878 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94227701748 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 106.607317073 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 257.4 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1273378507 43.030603864 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.625 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 5.23603664747 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.392080367864 0.215688989381 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.189663539609 0.103423049105 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.175892773873 0.0843802449381 208% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.336972883099 0.15604864568 216% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.211214707325 0.0819641961636 258% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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