The bar graph below shows the numbers of male and female research students studying six computer science subjects at a US university in 2011.Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar graph compares the number of male and female research students studying six computer science subjects at a US university in 2011.

A glance at graph reveals some striking similarities between male and female in natural sciences. It is evident from graph that more number of men are studying when compared to women, in contrast only linguistics is studied more by women.

AS is presented in the graph around 200 members are studying natural sciences

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...tudying six computer science subjects at a US university in 2011. A glance a...
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...t from graph that more number of men are studying when compared to women, in con...
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...er of men are studying when compared to women, in contrast only linguistics is s...
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...guistics is studied more by women. AS is presented in the graph around 200 me...
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...he graph around 200 members are studying natural sciences
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 33.7804878049 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 391.0 965.302439024 41% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 76.0 196.424390244 39% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14473684211 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.95259172374 3.73543355544 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6131923462 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 54.0 106.607317073 51% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.710526315789 0.547539520022 130% => OK
syllable_count: 117.9 283.868780488 42% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.1327753833 43.030603864 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.75 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378502077813 0.215688989381 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.232478894703 0.103423049105 225% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.211951741494 0.0843802449381 251% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.287337804284 0.15604864568 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.220706496068 0.0819641961636 269% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 40.7170731707 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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