The two diagrams depicts the process of manufacturing cement and Concrete.
Cement is prepared using two main ingredients namely limestone and clay, whereas Concrete is prepared by mainly by cement. In total we have 5 stages in cement preparation, whereas only 3 for Concrete preparation. Cement is prepared by crushing limestone and clay together, once the mixer is out , it is introduced to mixer to form a mixture, the third stage is passing the mixture to rotating tube , heat is inserted into the tube. The mixture is then passed to Grinder, this is the final stage in cement manufacturing.Concrete is manufactured by mixing cement(15%),water(10%),sand(25%)and Gravel(50%) in concrete mixer well. The mixture of all four results in Concrete used for construction.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 295, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...and clay together, once the mixer is out , it is introduced to mixer to form a mix...
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Line 4, column 384, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he third stage is passing the mixture to rotating tube , heat is inserted into th...
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Line 4, column 399, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...is passing the mixture to rotating tube , heat is inserted into the tube. The mix...
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Line 4, column 521, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Concrete
...the final stage in cement manufacturing.Concrete is manufactured by mixing cement15%,wat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
then, third, well, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 644.0 965.302439024 67% => OK
No of words: 120.0 196.424390244 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36666666667 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.30975091965 3.73543355544 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.89364106483 2.65546596893 147% => OK
Unique words: 73.0 106.607317073 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608333333333 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 201.6 283.868780488 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.4729404928 43.030603864 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.333333333 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254483894694 0.215688989381 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137748439299 0.103423049105 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505674163817 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193174723348 0.15604864568 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358965068832 0.0819641961636 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 61.2550243902 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.06136585366 123% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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