The chart gives information about life expectancy percentage for people living in Asian countries including Wester Asia, India, China, South-eastern Asia, Other South-central Asia and Other Eastern Asia since 69years ago and predicts it by 2300./ until 281 yaers of the future.
An overview of the chart indicates that there are a dramatic increase trend over the period. As can be seen from the graph that life expectancy of people live in Other Eastern Asia is highest level between other regions and climbing from just about %53 in 1950 to over 100% in 2300.
On the other hand, there is a marked upward across the period from 40% of Chinese life expectancy rating in 1950 to just under 100% in 2300.
Although Wester Asia life expectancy was more than 4 others regions in 1950, since 2010 India, China, South-eastern Asia had more significant trends than Wester Asia.so after china, South-eastern Asia, India, Wester Asia and Other Eastern Asia are respectively with percentage between 92% and 98%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'trends'?
Suggestion: trends
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the highest'.
Suggestion: is the highest
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 842.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07228915663 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53161172347 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572289156627 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.6318001829 43.030603864 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 168.4 112.824112599 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.2 22.9334400587 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114634254338 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724506116047 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441237414227 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0858386994685 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0237013005972 0.0819641961636 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.2329268293 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 61.2550243902 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.72 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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