The bar graph shows the global sales (in billions of dollars) of different types of digital games between 2000 and 2006
The bar graph compares the amount of money from 4 kinds of video games sold worldwide from 2000 to 2006.
It is clear that handheld games were the most popular type of games in this period and saw a steadily rose after six years. Besides, mobile games and online games had a dramatic increase in sales which come from approximately zero to big revenue.
In 2000, the biggest sales belong to Handle games which reach 11 billion dollars. The console game halved in less compared with Handle games, at about six billion in 2000. In contrast, Online game, and mobile games did still not appear in the game market and there was no revenue this year. After 3 years, Handheld games saw a considerable increase. Its income rose to 13 billion dollars in 2003. Mobile phones and online games also had an upward trend in 3 years but it just increased by about 3 billion dollars.
In 2006, Handheld games reach a peak of approximately 18 billion dollars. Console games continued the downward trend and decrease to 3 billion dollars. Conversely, Mobile games and online games saw an upward trend this period. Its revenue increased significantly to 7 and 8 billion dollar respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: You used an adverb ('steadily') instead an adjective, or a noun ('rose') instead of another adjective.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, conversely, if, so, still, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 974.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 203.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79802955665 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48262178057 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551724137931 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.392500545 43.030603864 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.9230769231 112.824112599 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6153846154 22.9334400587 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46153846154 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290776663277 0.215688989381 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118626555351 0.103423049105 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415209772375 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192229516331 0.15604864568 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028787624237 0.0819641961636 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.2329268293 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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