A bar graph on time 16 to 24-year-olds spent per week on sports and exercise by gender in England.
The given bar graph details the proportional time invested by both the sexes in the age-group 16 to 24 on a physical workout calculated on weekly basis in England.
Looking from the overall perspective, it is readily apparent that girls are less active in leisure activities than boys. Although females took part in many physical activities, their male counterparts spend significantly more hours in comparison.
According to the given illustration, approximately twice the girl's proportion(22%), who have no time to spend on any of the activities, are boys. More than 15% of girls love exercising for an hour, while this applies to only 11% of boys. In the context of 1 to 3 hours, both the genders leveled off at 20%.
On the other hand, a noticeable difference can be witnessed in the case of more than 3 hours among males and females. About 1 in every 10 girls go for 3 to 5 hours activity which is less by 2% than boys. Between 5 to 7 hours of the window, boys lead girls by nearly 9%. Also, about 15% of males fall in over 7 hours of time slab as against only 5% of girls who exercise for such long hours.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 922.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75860471978 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.0559478307 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 5.23603664747 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123518262618 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0469566512895 0.103423049105 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0803985430609 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0943879919829 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107987000979 0.0819641961636 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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