The below graph compares the age structure of India and France in 1984

Essay topics:

The below graph compares the age structure of India and France in 1984.

The given bar graph accurately compares the proportion of man and women in two separate countries France and India in 1984.

In India, it is noticeable that the highest percentage was recorded in 0-5 year age group 7% for both the categories; furthermore, In the age group 5-20 it remained between 5.5% to 6.5%. Surprisingly, from age group 20-25 it decreased at an interval of 0.5% till 70 years old people for both the gender. Lastly, the value recorded 1% for the people having greater than seventy age.

Coming to France, the proportion of male and female was the same throughout the chart. Moreover, In the age group 0 to 40 percentage remained roughly 3.5%. Similarly, for age 45-60 the proportion was approximately 2.5%; while, for the people having age 65-75 was only 2%. From age 75-85 the percentage decrease at 0.5 difference at every five years.

Overall, the proportion of Indian people decreases with an increase in age. Whereas, in France, some fluctuations can be seen.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, lastly, moreover, similarly, so, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 828.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95808383234 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72583374418 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610778443114 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0622449401 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.8 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 5.23603664747 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211023840126 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817477067976 0.103423049105 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.086193946715 0.0843802449381 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142107681342 0.15604864568 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103715587886 0.0819641961636 127% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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