Calorie sources for UK males at different age group.
The bar chart depicts the information about the different calorific sources of UK men of varying age group, 0-24, 25-49 and 50+. The sources are Diary, meat, pulses and vegetables.
It us clear from the chart that, 0-24 age group has the main source of calorie is diary products with over 40% and other resources equal at around 20% except pulses with 18%. While, meat is the highest source of calorie in the 25-49 age group as 50% followed by diary at 25%, vegetable at 15% and pulses representing just 10%.
In addition to this, over 50 age group the largest contributor are pulses with 60% and the diary and neat is 10% and 20% respectively. Whereas, vegetables is just 10%.
Overall, pulses are the least favourable sources of calorie for the youngster, with vegetable also making up a minority contribution among every age group.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...youngster, with vegetable also making up a minority contribution among every age ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, whereas, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 699.0 965.302439024 72% => OK
No of words: 145.0 196.424390244 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82068965517 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47010008196 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50246964818 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613793103448 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 200.7 283.868780488 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5823232817 43.030603864 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8571428571 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 5.23603664747 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374344055312 0.215688989381 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161797582516 0.103423049105 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0958732947476 0.0843802449381 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219139042495 0.15604864568 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0830696521159 0.0819641961636 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.