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The given line graph illustrates the volume of travelers to and from UK in the period of 1979 to 1999, while the bar chart depicts the numbers of tourists from the UK to five countries in 1999. Overall it is apparent that over the 20 years there was a drammatic increase in the UK residents traveling abroad, while the figure of the visitors to the UK experienced a slight rise. In 1999, according to the bar chart, main countries where the UK residents travelled to, were France and Spain, while the USA, Greece and Turkey had less tourists from this country.
The line graph shows that the numbers of travellers from and to the UK was nearly similar, at 10 million in 1979. Later, British tourists’ number developed gradually to just over 50 million, whereas the visitors to the UK became about 25mln.
As for the UK residents traveling abroad, the vast majority visited France (over 10 mln) and Spain (nearly 9 mln). Fewer number of British tourists were hosted by the USA (4 mln), Greece (3 mln) and Turkey (2 mln).
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 529, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun tourists is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...n, while the USA, Greece and Turkey had less tourists from this country. The line g...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
whereas, while, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 837.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5989010989 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47038368601 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549450549451 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2313046215 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.571428571 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 5.23603664747 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0801747166671 0.215688989381 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0403453348248 0.103423049105 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638603888039 0.0843802449381 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0438479599574 0.15604864568 28% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620103796542 0.0819641961636 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 61.2550243902 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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