The chart below about womans continue work after they have children?the chart shows four different age of group?
The circular charts reveal the information about the woman continue work. After they have children and with four different children categories. The data is calibrated in percentum.which is clearly and coherently represented,
It can be seen that in category 0-2 year children and women done the not any work because she is only caring her baby, furthermore during the 3-4 years age children then 37% woman has done the part-time work for complete her babies basic needs, Apart from all this during the year of 5-9 babies after that 25%. woman has been done then fulltime work because her baby busy in own study, furthermore, in age group 5-9 years woman working has not working, part-time work,fulltime is 25% , 40% and 35% woman's respectively,
As far as trend is concerned that in during
The age group 10 years children then only 10% woman has do not any work. However, 45% woman's has been done the part-time job, and equal woman's is done the fulltime work moreover, in age group 3-4 years children then women's has not working, fulltime work, part-time work has been 78%,10%and 12% woman's respectively.
Over, it is evident that in age group 0-2 mostly woman has been free for her babies caring compare as to other age of groups.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 312, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Woman
... the year of 5-9 babies after that 25%. woman has been done then fulltime work becaus...
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Line 2, column 468, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , fulltime
... working has not working, part-time work,fulltime is 25% , 40% and 35% womans respective...
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Line 2, column 484, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... working, part-time work,fulltime is 25% , 40% and 35% womans respectively, As f...
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Line 2, column 494, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...part-time work,fulltime is 25% , 40% and 35% womans respectively, As far as tren...
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Line 3, column 44, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...far as trend is concerned that in during The age group 10 years children then onl...
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Line 4, column 57, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'done'.
Suggestion: done
... years children then only 10% woman has do not any work. However, 45% womans has b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, then, apart from, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1024.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 212.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83018867925 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54879857505 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509433962264 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 298.8 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 22.4926829268 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 124.975553165 43.030603864 290% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 170.666666667 112.824112599 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.3333333333 22.9334400587 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 5.23603664747 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353626479799 0.215688989381 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.222445184189 0.103423049105 215% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0965560821172 0.0843802449381 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193398535521 0.15604864568 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.147903848059 0.0819641961636 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.2329268293 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.87 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.33 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.9970731707 145% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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