The chart below give information about the most common sports played in New Zealand in 2002.

Essay topics:

The chart below give information about the most common sports played in New Zealand in 2002.

The bar chart shows the proportion of boys and girls who took part in most popular sports in New Zealand in 2002. In general, there were significant different in the choices between boys and girls and can be seen clearly in 3 categories: cricket, netball and soccer.

Regardings girls, there was a quarters played netball, swimming is a little bit lower with approximately 18%. The percentage of those who played tennis, basketball and soccer were around 8%, 7% and 6% respectively. about 5% joined athletics, while martial arts accounted for under 3%. cricket was the least number with only 1%. finally, there was about 1 tenths joined other type of sports.

On the other hand, most of boys chose soccer with nearly 25%. Less than 15% went swimming and around 10% played cricket. about martial arts, tennis and basketball there were respective approximately 9%,8% and 7%. while athletes accounted for more than 5%, netball had the least figure with only 1%. finally, other type of sports was more than 17%.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 29, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a quarter' or simply 'quarters'?
Suggestion: a quarter; quarters
...r. Regardings girls, there was a quarters played netball, swimming is a little bi...
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Line 6, column 70, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
... quarters played netball, swimming is a little bit lower with approximately 18%. The perce...
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Line 6, column 216, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: About
...were around 8%, 7% and 6% respectively. about 5% joined athletics, while martial arts...
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Line 6, column 286, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Cricket
...le martial arts accounted for under 3%. cricket was the least number with only 1%. fina...
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Line 6, column 329, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Finally
...cket was the least number with only 1%. finally, there was about 1 tenths joined other ...
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Line 11, column 20, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the boys') or simply say ''most boys''.
Suggestion: most of the boys; most boys
... of sports. On the other hand, most of boys chose soccer with nearly 25%. Less than...
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Line 11, column 122, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: About
...swimming and around 10% played cricket. about martial arts, tennis and basketball the...
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Line 11, column 214, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
... respective approximately 9%,8% and 7%. while athletes accounted for more than 5%, ne...
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Line 11, column 300, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Finally
...ball had the least figure with only 1%. finally, other type of sports was more than 17%...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, regarding, so, while, in general, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 862.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07058823529 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47439482658 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611764705882 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9538186479 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.8333333333 112.824112599 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1666666667 22.9334400587 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.23603664747 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169112810441 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582298468136 0.103423049105 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735988793672 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115153188957 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044827784873 0.0819641961636 55% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.2329268293 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 61.2550243902 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.53 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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