The chart below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts illustrate the percentage of people aged in three different groups in Yemen and Italy in 2000 and also give data for 2050.
It is obvious that by 2000 the group of 15-59 years old people have nearly half percent, while the prediction shows this percentage will increase more the half present and this group become the most range of people in the society. In Italy the the maximum percentage related to 15-59 years group in 2000 and this percentage will decline in 2050.
As can be seen, half of the people who lived in Yemen included 0-14 years old 2000 50.1% and the second group 46.3% was 15-59 years people, this range group includes those who can work for the government before their tired age, while the teenager's percentage in 2050 will decrease about 14% and the worker group will raise more than 11% the last 60+ years has not more significant by 3.6 % in 2000 and 5.7% in 2050 in Yemen. In contrast, in Italy, the 15-59 years has the majority percentage 61.6 and the other two ranges of ages 0-14 and 60+ were in order to 24.% and 14.3% that the forecasts will show the adult people percent will sharply increase more than 42% and the teenagers rate drop around 3 % in addition the percent of 15-59 years people of society in Italy fall to 46.2%
As a result, by 2050 the range of people who live in Italy will increase and the society will go old Yemen has a completely different situation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, so, while, in addition, in contrast, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 1.00243902439 998% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1163.0 965.302439024 120% => OK
No of words: 258.0 196.424390244 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50775193798 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15044718069 2.65546596893 81% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.476744186047 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 328.5 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 22.4926829268 227% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 156.756626654 43.030603864 364% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 232.6 112.824112599 206% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.6 22.9334400587 225% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.2 5.23603664747 252% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119857315484 0.215688989381 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100749511404 0.103423049105 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795966458412 0.0843802449381 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113982524933 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0795382320642 0.0819641961636 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.6 13.2329268293 193% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 61.2550243902 74% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.6 10.3012195122 190% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.77 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.4 10.9970731707 204% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 11.0658536585 235% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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