The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart gives some information about the number of households in five distinct groups of annual income in the United States in 2007, 2011 and 2015.
It is obvious that, there was an upward trend between households earning less than 25000$, 25000-49999$, 75000$-99999$ and 100000$ or more, whereas the people who earned between 50000$-74999$ did not change in 2007, 2011 and 2015.
As can be seen, by 2007 the annually income of households in less than 25000$ was 25 million and it increased about 2 million in 25000$-49999$ and then dropped around 11 million between 50000$-99999$ and increase sharply more than 15 million to under 30 million in 100000$ or more. The annual money that gained in different families in five groups was ordered around 27 million and has a few increased about 2 million then fail until under 15 million and raised again more than 10 million in 2011. Finally, by 2015 the number of households in less than 25000$ was approximately 26 million and increased between 25000-49999$ about 1 million decreased sharply 10 million and soar dramatically more than 35 million and reached the peak.
As a result, most people earn more than 10000$.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 84, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$25000'.
Suggestion: $25000
...nd between households earning less than 25000$, 25000-49999$, 75000hBc99999$ and 10000...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 125, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$100000'.
Suggestion: $100000
...5000$, 25000-49999$, 75000hBc99999$ and 100000$ or more, whereas the people who earned ...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 72, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$25000'.
Suggestion: $25000
...ually income of households in less than 25000$ was 25 million and it increased about 2...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 268, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$100000'.
Suggestion: $100000
... than 15 million to under 30 million in 100000$ or more. The annual money that gained i...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 556, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$25000'.
Suggestion: $25000
...5 the number of households in less than 25000$ was approximately 26 million and increa...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 41, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$10000'.
Suggestion: $10000
...As a result, most people earn more than 10000$.
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, so, then, whereas, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 982.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9847715736 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77075535048 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543147208122 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.1323774021 43.030603864 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.666666667 112.824112599 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.8333333333 22.9334400587 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 5.23603664747 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120648856596 0.215688989381 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.08665710228 0.103423049105 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0964650611105 0.0843802449381 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108506989262 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111772156427 0.0819641961636 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.2329268293 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.84 61.2550243902 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.2 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.4329268293 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.0658536585 154% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 84, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$25000'.
Suggestion: $25000
...nd between households earning less than 25000$, 25000-49999$, 75000hBc99999$ and 10000...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 125, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$100000'.
Suggestion: $100000
...5000$, 25000-49999$, 75000hBc99999$ and 100000$ or more, whereas the people who earned ...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 72, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$25000'.
Suggestion: $25000
...ually income of households in less than 25000$ was 25 million and it increased about 2...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 268, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$100000'.
Suggestion: $100000
... than 15 million to under 30 million in 100000$ or more. The annual money that gained i...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 556, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$25000'.
Suggestion: $25000
...5 the number of households in less than 25000$ was approximately 26 million and increa...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 41, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$10000'.
Suggestion: $10000
...As a result, most people earn more than 10000$.
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, so, then, whereas, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 982.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9847715736 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77075535048 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543147208122 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.1323774021 43.030603864 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.666666667 112.824112599 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.8333333333 22.9334400587 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 5.23603664747 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120648856596 0.215688989381 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.08665710228 0.103423049105 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0964650611105 0.0843802449381 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108506989262 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111772156427 0.0819641961636 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.2329268293 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.84 61.2550243902 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.2 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.4329268293 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.0658536585 154% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.