The chart below gives information about the amount of time children spend with their parents.
The bar charts compare to how much time is consumed that seen in children with their parents.
Overall, it can be seen that almost all the time are more spending in weekdays rather than the day at weekends, in which, mothers are always to be with their children than fathers are on with.
On the weekdays, it is certain that the ages from all the levels in the children who almost spend time with their mother from 1 to nearly 8 hours a day. However, that only 1 to 2 hours that to do things in both father and mother and their father which are used by children.
On the other hand, on the weekends, the figure of spending time for children witnessed a mitigate of dad with it has just roughly 2 hours. Nevertheless, the week time children spend alone their moms are 3 hours less than the weekdays, but actually, it had ever still more than dad. In comparison to the other aspect, at weekends children from 2 to 9 ages have around 10 hours to be with their dad and mom, whereas the children 0-1 ages still have less time with both of father and mother.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 88, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...of spending time for children witnessed a mitigate of dad with it has just roughly 2 hours...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, nevertheless, so, still, whereas, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 857.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30653266332 4.92477711251 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19615812899 2.65546596893 83% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497487437186 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 245.7 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.3593179254 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.428571429 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4285714286 22.9334400587 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7142857143 5.23603664747 205% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309952608626 0.215688989381 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.175433007385 0.103423049105 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512629952506 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22058025399 0.15604864568 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033576246653 0.0819641961636 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.9 61.2550243902 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.01 11.4140731707 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.85 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 40.7170731707 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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