It is becoming increasingly popular to find out about family history. Reasons. ls this negative or positive?
Owing to the development of technology, the original of the family are more attracted to almost all people are seeking for. How this is taking more excited into curiosity into themselves, from overall perspectives, some pieces of evidence that will be mentioned in this essays which actually offering benefits by discovering their ancestors.
It is starting from keen on interest to their genesis where placing they were born or any relatives with others that not ever had known them. Along with the honour of their ancestors, this broadens the knowledge about what are the previous generation undergoing vital events in past. Indeed, Vietnam was a former French colony, however, our ancestors were soldiers that had been fought out by the invaders to protecting the peace of our own’s country or the generation later on. From this, they felt proud of their root and continuing their patriotism that ancestors was ligated for us.
Furthermore, most of the entire family have similar genes which could be heredity the same information cells. It meant that the health will be kept their genes somewhat among all members of the family. Strikingly, people who are finding their origins could be avoided some illnesses such as cancer or heart disease, diabetes. Whereby, the doctor may have no trouble in curing patients, they will be keeping their health be better, reliance on detected any ailment in their ancestors.
In conclusion, the findings of family history are essential than ever had, this could be becoming motivation to guarding traditions that the previous generation passed on us. We will be kept away from the risk of illness that are existing in the family history.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, furthermore, however, may, so, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13818181818 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56575283363 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610909090909 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1984799875 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.75 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9166666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116811561479 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0454690435986 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049258699764 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0813056171952 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536048197312 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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