In today’s world of advanced science and technology, we still greatly value our artists such as musicians, painters, and writers. What can art tell us about life that science and technology cannot?
Owing to the latest science and technology, it is irrefutable that have tremendously benefited human beings in various ways. Nevertheless, arts are still widely credited for insight into the life which advanced technology is failed to. This essay will be discussed on what exactly arts are performing in all aspects of our life.
It is incontrovertible that the emergence of technology has had a profound impact on humankind to constant ground-breaking discoveries. Indeed, the treasure trove of scientific information is acquiring how the world operates with its branches ranging from chemistry, biology to astronomy. What it means that is explained mysteries that have been happening in the corner of life such as why oxygen might be reacted to copper or why mammoths had been extinct over the period. However, this does not seem to fulfil boundless curiosity about culture or society which are happening effectively.
There are acknowledged that arts reflect us about culture and lifestyle that exist in nowadays. It is an interpretation that Buddhism Religion is a prominent culture that many people are worship. These matters are hardly be explained in the realm of science. In addition, artworks are also demonstrating the history via sculpture, heritage which have remained to the later generation. Whereby making impressed to those who are needed to broaden one’s mind and outlook. The evidence to prove these matters is national costumes which are a way to express oneself in respect to the artisan who had designed like Ao Dai, an iconic of women in Vietnam.
In conclusion, arts are a great influence on one's expedition in seeking culture in different objects. Science is fictional of its domain that cannot depict all the art and culture are taking into the shed lights.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 84, Rule ID: IN_NOWADAYS[1]
Message: nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: 'nowadays'.
Suggestion: nowadays
... about culture and lifestyle that exist in nowadays. It is an interpretation that Buddhism ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, still, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21527777778 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9225387318 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618055555556 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3547008434 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.133333333 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192551817511 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538153976457 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532898795564 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112909918366 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645445360627 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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