The chart below gives information about a most common sports
played in the UK in 2008.
The bar graph illustrates information about the most common games
that played in UK in the year of 2008.
It is clear that Net ball was most played sport item among girls,in
contrast soccer was most popular among boys. Also, the lowest often
practiced sport between boys is net ball while it is cricket between girls. In
addition, the biggest differennce was the number of male and female who
played Netball.
As can be seen from the chart, the most popular sport played by boys
is soccer with a participation rate of approximately 25%, while this sport
was only loved by the females with 5%. The other had the second largest
number of players , nearly two times as much as female players about
10%. Obviously, male played more cricket than women, with 10% and 2%
proportion respectively. The participation of the both genders of the table
tennis was smaller about 8%.
Looking at the chart in more detail, the most favorite sport of the girls
was netball, accounting 25%, as opposed to 2% in boys. On the other hand,
Swimming had the biggest differennce of female and male who joined of
them, with 23% females and 14% males. The participation of the both
genders of the basketball tennis was equal about 7%. Jogging are less
popular than other sports, only about 3% with the participation rates.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, second, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1149.0 965.302439024 119% => OK
No of words: 225.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10666666667 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53001792099 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528888888889 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7813970539 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.454545455 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4545454545 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 5.23603664747 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 19.0 3.83414634146 496% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 1.69756097561 943% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274508158501 0.215688989381 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106530263226 0.103423049105 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115976399209 0.0843802449381 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0842235409678 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0963031615162 0.0819641961636 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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