The chart below gives information about the most common sports played in New Zealand in 2002.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrated the distribution of 8 categories of sports which were the most popular among both sexes in New Zealand in 2002.
Overall, girls loved the netball while boys almost hated it. soccer player among men had the most percentage. other games played 18 and 10 percent by boys and girls, respectively.
In one side, 25 percent of women played netball. The second place belonged to swimming by 2.5 percent lower than netball. other sports such as athletics, basketball, tennis, and soccer played approximately 5 percent of girls. In fact, females did not like martial arts and cricket as well as men.
On the other hand, 25 percent of males played soccer and almost half of the females liked swimming. men did not like netball in contrast the women but the tennis and basketball players are around 7 percent in both genders. other sports were placed second by 18 percent of male players.
- The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between Between 2000 and 2009.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 73
- Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 67
- The Graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kindom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
- The maps below show the center of a small town called Islip as it is now and plans for its development.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 67
- University students are increasingly studying abroad as part of their studies. Do the advantages of studying abroad outweigh the disadvantages? 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Other
...ayer among men had the most percentage. other games played 18 and 10 percent by boys ...
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Suggestion: Other
...ming by 2.5 percent lower than netball. other sports such as athletics, basketball, t...
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Suggestion: Men
... almost half of females liked swimming. men did not like netball in contrast the wo...
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Suggestion: Other
...s are around 7 percent in both genders. other sports were placed second by 18 percent...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, second, so, well, while, in contrast, in fact, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 769.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92948717949 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46723266335 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596153846154 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 214.2 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.5184491966 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.9090909091 112.824112599 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1818181818 22.9334400587 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.18181818182 5.23603664747 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0968626658072 0.215688989381 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0392059643154 0.103423049105 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501251710649 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0760583486294 0.15604864568 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622567256539 0.0819641961636 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 61.2550243902 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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