Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Economic growth concerns most of governments all over the world. The majority of them strongly believe that the only way of development is to pay attention to this issue, while some people disagree. They opine other progress such as cultural has the same value as money. I agree with the second idea to some extent and in this essay, both views will be discussed.
However, a wealthy man might not be prosperous, a poor one is miserable absolutely. On one hand, from the point of view of governments, the industry is the drive of the economy. Productive and qualified industry leads to export which means earning more money and the amount of money distribution per person increases. For instance, men with higher incomes, which caused by the administrative section efforts on the economy, maybe more satisfied, therefore the entire society becomes healthier.
On the other hand, it can be observed the rate of depressed people's growth and it has nothing to do with the upward trend of their income usually. this reveals the number of earnings not only cannot guarantee happiness but also is the cause of emotional diseases. this shows policymakers must take action on other aspects of their people such as culture or communication skills improvement. For example, official USA statistics illustrate that the working hours in America peaks significantly, although in the same period the family or friend’s reunion hours per week plummets almost to 30 minutes which can cause several serious problems in behavior. Thus, this point should be considered that the main goal of increasing the size of the economy is reaching a better life, not a gloomy one.
To summarize the article, although economic growth should be the first priority of governments, the other sides of the nation should not be forgotten and those are as vital as monetary policies. In future states must distribute their effort on all characteristics of their folks whereas focusing on the economy specifically.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 26, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the governments') or simply say ''most governments''.
Suggestion: most of the governments; most governments
Economic growth concerns most of governments all over the world. The majority of the...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...e upward trend of their income usually. this reveals the number of earnings not only...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...lso is the cause of emotional diseases. this shows policymakers must take action on ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, thus, whereas, while, for example, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14769230769 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80835608592 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609230769231 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.219518118 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.533333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.93333333333 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117486275407 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0394213979991 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0304287719512 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0716543317461 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425165737119 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.