The chart below gives information about the purpose of visits to five cities in the UK in 2003.
The diagram reveals data about the aim of people who visit to five different cities of United Kingdom in 2013.
As an overall trend ,it can be seen that,the figure for holiday accounted for the highest proportion of visitors as miscellaneous's figure was the least one in terms of visitors in the given year.
To begin with ,holiday's figure had percentage of exactly 50% in London , however business was 30% lower compare to holiday and visiting friends or relatives depicted about 22% which was slightly higher than business . The figure for miscellaneous had the lowest percentage of roughly 10%. Holiday had the highest portion of approximately 70%, but business and miscellaneous were lower which the former indicated just 10%, the latter was 0% in Edinburgh. The figure for visiting friends or relatives was noticeably lower (18%) than holiday .
Business had a higher share of around 33% compare with holiday and visiting friends or relatives ,both of which were slightly lower (22% and 25%) as the figure for miscellaneous accounted for a least one in terms of visitors in Manchester . Business's figure was a higher percentage (roughly 50%) than visiting friends or relatives (22%). Conversely ,holiday and miscellaneous which illustrated to around 20% and 10% , respectively in Birmingham .
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...le who visit to five different cities of United Kingdom in 2013. As an overal...
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...Kingdom in 2013. As an overall trend ,it can be seen that,the figure for holid...
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...tors in the given year. To begin with ,holidays figure had percentage of exactl...
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...es was noticeably lower 18% than holiday . Business had a higher share of arou...
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...of which were slightly lower 22% and 25% as the figure for miscellaneous accounte...
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...t one in terms of visitors in Manchester . Businesss figure was a higher percentag...
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...gure was a higher percentage roughly 50% than visiting friends or relatives 22%. ...
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...ing friends or relatives 22%. Conversely ,holiday and miscellaneous which illustra...
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... which illustrated to around 20% and 10% , respectively in Birmingham .
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...20% and 10% , respectively in Birmingham .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, however, if, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1086.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 207.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24637681159 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88481512439 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487922705314 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 329.4 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.0592922409 43.030603864 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.666666667 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 5.23603664747 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 1.69756097561 884% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0714395433958 0.215688989381 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0413975490904 0.103423049105 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584077269851 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0684454306184 0.15604864568 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0745169778165 0.0819641961636 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.