The chart below gives information about Southland s main exports in 2000 20 and future projections for 2025

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The chart below gives information about Southland's main exports in 2000,*20...,and future projections for 2025.

The bar chart illustrate information about three main exports of Southland's in 2000,*20... , and future projections for 2025.
Overall,it can be seen that international tourism is in growing trend from the past to future export of Dairy products show the fluctuating nature.
In 2025,International tourism was the most exported and the least exported were Meat products.Meat products in which only earned 6 billion pounds.However in *20...,the Dairy product for the highest export with the total earning was nearly £10 billion,the Meat product was still the smallest whereby declined instead to about 5.5 billion pounds.In Dairy products rate 7 billion pounds sell abroad from the in 2000,and then in *20... rising to 3 billion pounds.To begin,the International tourism stood at just over 8 billion sterling in 2000,then it *20... it increases by about one billion sterling and the expectations for the year 2025,it will rises to reach approximately 10 billion pounds.Clearly, international tourism has an upward trend which will increase export.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ain exports of Southlands in 2000,*20... , and future projections for 2025. Overa...
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...nd future projections for 2025. Overall,it can be seen that international tourism ...
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Suggestion: Meat
...d the least exported were Meat products.Meat products in which only earned 6 billion...
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Suggestion: However
...s in which only earned 6 billion pounds.However in *20...,the Dairy product for the hig...
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Line 3, column 146, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...s in which only earned 6 billion pounds.However in *20...,the Dairy product for the hig...
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Line 3, column 163, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...arned 6 billion pounds.However in *20...,the Dairy product for the highest export wi...
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...the total earning was nearly £10 billion,the Meat product was still the smallest whe...
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Suggestion: In
...ned instead to about 5.5 billion pounds.In Dairy products rate 7 billion pounds se...
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Suggestion: To
...en in *20... rising to 3 billion pounds.To begin,the International tourism stood a...
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Suggestion: , the
...0... rising to 3 billion pounds.To begin,the International tourism stood at just ove...
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Line 3, column 645, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'rise'
Suggestion: rise
... expectations for the year 2025,it will rises to reach approximately 10 billion pound...
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Line 3, column 692, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Clearly
...o reach approximately 10 billion pounds.Clearly, international tourism has an upward tr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, still, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 889.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55625 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18989908834 2.65546596893 120% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65625 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 128.017793902 43.030603864 298% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 148.166666667 112.824112599 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6666666667 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293856336024 0.215688989381 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.211323409257 0.103423049105 204% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.168734947081 0.0843802449381 200% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.309283669959 0.15604864568 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.285085432699 0.0819641961636 348% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.2329268293 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 11.4140731707 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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